I
have my own dream house. It is not too big, but there is love, happiness, joy
inside it, it is not only a house, but also a home for my small family and me
later on. My own dream house is located near rice field and river to make my
children know about their nature. When they know about nature, they will know
how to make their nature green and clean. My own dream house has a green
garden, 4 rooms, and complete facilities like hotspot zone, playing garden,
small swimming pool, and a small house for one dog.
I will have a green garden and 4
rooms inside of my house. My garden is green because there are many flowers,
trees, and green grass. Roses, sun flowers, mignonette flowers are kind of
flowers that are available in my garden. Between the trees and flowers, there
will be some tracks to go to my own living room, 2 bed rooms and one kitchen.
The living room is a place for my family to take their time to relax from the
routine. 2 bed rooms are a place for my family to sleep at night or whenever
they want to sleep and one kitchen is a place for me to cook something for my
family. My green garden and my 4 rooms will be so gorgeous.
My green house is not only green but
also has complete facilities. There will be a hot spot zone in the middle of
living room, playing garden, swimming pool, and small house for my dog is
available near the green garden. A hot spot zone is very useful to help my
family to find information or everything in the internet. A hot spot zone is
same as a cybercafé. A playing garden and a small swimming pool can make my
children later on feeling comfortable to stay in our house. The last but not
the least is a small house for my dog. I really love dog and dog can help us to
protect our house at night from thief.
My green house will be so green,
safe, and full of love, happiness and joy.
My dream house will not be ordinary as the other houses. My dream house
will be so extraordinary. When I can build my own dream house, make sure you
will not get jealous with me.
Wow, that will be impressive house if you built it soon.
ReplyDeleteactually your writing is good for me,and just state a bit reason about what "routine" do you mean.
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Hi Yura! :D I think your writing is really good. I love your ideas in every paragraph that you had made. Having such a green house, it'll make us to be so relax and to be enjoy the view. I think it's really nice to get some fresh air from our own home. After read your writing, I'm planning to have a hotspot zone in my own too because it's so efficient to us and give us an easier way to travel the whole world, right? Last but not least, I'm interesting with your warning in the end of your writing. I can't wait to come to your future house and there, we'll see whether I will jealous to you or not.
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Hi Ery, thank you so much for your comment. A word "routine" here means that our activities. Our here means that all of my family including me. Can you get my point?
ReplyDeleteHi Ayu Surya, thank you so much for your comment too dear :* I also love your ideas and the way you combine your ideas to make an interesting writing. I wish that our dream house can be built as soon as possible :3
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Yura :*
Yura, I think our dream house seems alike because you give attention to the nature around your house too. yeah, it is very important for us, moreover if we realize that our earth condition is getting worst. I love the way you describre your house because it is very clear and easy to understand, so the readers will very easy to imagine how your house looks like and your conclution, I love it. the last sentence really figure how nice your house will be and the warning seems smart to state there.
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Hi Merry, thank you so much for your comment buddy:)
ReplyDeleteI were really going into the realm of my imagination when I read your writing. I can imagine everything you described in your writing. That pictures might actually represent how great your house will be. actually you already describe it in detail. It must be better to describe it more detail, such as the furniture inside your house, the color,etc. haha, I know it will be very long, and your writing is already long :D. That very great reason why you wanna take place your house inside the nature. just text me, or find me if your house is already built up :) I think I would get jealous :p
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